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Hey Man!

Good Work Just add some sound! Loved the graphics!

Fantastic Man!

Funny as Hell! Keep makin em! A series perhaps! Reveiw back if your having a series and tell me when it will be out!

Hey wait!

I like your style! But listen to me carefully I want you to write a reveiw back to me and write if you will take my advice! You know that drawing you did at the end of the movie? That was pretty damn good, I think you should use the Brush Tool instead of the Line Tool, and instead of having it comic style animate those characters like in your drawing! Because the one in the movie just then is really different to the character you drew. Go with the Brush tool not the Line Tool! And animate smoothly not comic style???? Write back as soon as you see this reveiw! Please I hope this helps the series and brings it to new heights?????
Or you can email me at pppjroberts@iinet.net.au
But good movie anyways!

Jon-Mahashintina responds:

Interesting, I will try that. That pic at the end was hand drawn by me and i scanned it in so im not sure how well ill do freehand on the computer. Thanx for the suggestion.

Well...

It was ok. But the animation was really blocky! You only were animating from side view! If you want a better score you should really try to move around the characters more! It builds up the excitement! I thought this would be cool but only before you start doing what I said, is when you will get a good score. Anyways good sound and a good idea! You will only get a good score because your an A+ Batting Average!
Try harder on the real one!

madarkwasp responds:

I'll try to make more views, the one Optimus is pretty detailed. and thanks for the good score :)

Great

Great! Tell me what songs you used!
PLEASE

Fantastic

This is one of my favourites! Great Job!

jerricco-team responds:

Sweet man. Thanks alot.

It was OK

Just work on the animation. Like make a walking animation, (for example when that guy with the beard walks of you just tweened him of the screen.) One other thing it seems you are trying to get out of animating with lips!? You should not make everything with something covering there mouths. Just put a bit more effort! and you will have a good flash! Overall a great concept great sound and good art! Hope this helped and i hope i see these changes in the next episode! And the movie with these changes will get around 3.60/5.00!

jjrocks2002 responds:

heh, i'll do it next episode... EPISODE 8!!!! LOL... i hope to win an award with the junior series...

Um...Ok

Now listen! If you want a good score you have to make it look more like a commic book!
Second it needs animation! You can't use the line "Oh...yeah, it's a? COMIC BOOK!" to get out of animating! Just put more effort and you will have a great movie!
Hope this helps!

WOW

What a Series of events just because he wanted a smoke!
LOL
Great FRONT PAGE AND A NEW FAVOURITE!

Daily Feature

Front Page Material mate! It is going in my favorites!
Great Art Animation and sound!
EXCELENT!
Oh! And a good story!
Oh! and you led into different scenes very very very well!
Cool Movie
Thasnx for the pleasure!
MY PREDICTION FOR SCORE! 4.80!

Hey Guy's, Check out my website for all your Graphic Design needs! :) Cheers, Mason Roberts - www.mmagic.net

Mason Roberts @Masonogy1

Age 34, Male

Aquinas

Western Australia

Joined on 1/12/03

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